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Continue Ielts essay sample answers Here you can find IELTS Writing Samples (both General and Academic) and answers to them. The materials are provided by experienced IELTS tutors or gathered from the best free IELTS preparation resources. All samples are constantly being renewed and correspond to the real exam sections. See also IELTS Writing exercises Academic Task 1: Sample 1 Pie chart Sample 2 Diagram ... See more Essay (Task 2): Sample 1 Presenting your opinion ... See more General Task 1: Sample 1 Formal letter Sample 2 Semi-formal letter ... See more A model answer for each type of IELTS essayAn IELTS essay is a ‘discursive essay’ where you may have to discuss an issue, give an opinion, explain the advantages or disadvantages, write about problems or causes of problems and give solutions. There are 5 variations to an IELTS discursive essay. In this blog post, there are 7 model answers for IELTS writing task 2. These are based on essays my students have written with help from me to correct them and make them more concise and clear.First, let’s look at these important points.In a problem-solution essay or an advantage disadvantage essay, the instruction words will ask something like:What problems does this cause, what solutions can you suggest? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?Notice the plural form here, advantages and disadvantages. Many students (and IELTS teachers) think they have to write more than one advantage and disadvantage or more than one problem and solution. Yes, you can certainly do this but you can also make it much simpler by writing about one advantage and one disadvantage. The same goes for a problem solution essay.Another point to consider is that you may run out of time if you write 2 of each. You will have only 40 minutes for the essay. Planning time is around 10 minutes so that means 30 minutes of writing. Another danger of writing about 2 of each is that your word count will go well over 300 words.What does the marking criteria say?Band 8 Task Response states-> ‘presents a well-developed response to the question with relevant, extended and supported ideas…’ There is nothing mentioned in the marking criteria about having more than one advantage or disadvantage only that it needs to be well developed, relevant and supported. So you can take one advantage one disadvantage, explain them well and support them with a specific example within an essay of between 260 to 300 words. Same for a problem solution essay, one problem one solution. Band 7 coherence and cohesion it states-> ‘presents a clear central topic within each paragraph…’ January 11, 2019 by Liz The IELTS writing task 2 sample answer below has examiner comments and is band score 9. The topic of social media is common and this IELTS essay question was reported in the IELTS test. Check the model essay and then read the comments. Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree? Social networking sites, for instance Facebook, are thought by some to have had a detrimental effect on individual people as well as society and local communities. However, while I believe that such sites are mainly beneficial to the individual, I agree that they have had a damaging effect on local communities. With regards to individuals, the impact that online social media has had on each individual person has clear advantages. Firstly, people from different countries are brought together through such sites as Facebook whereas before the development of technology and social networking sites, people rarely had the chance to meet or communicate with anyone outside of their immediate circle or community. Secondly, Facebook also has social groups which offer individuals a chance to meet and participate in discussions with people who share common interests. On the other hand, the effect that Facebook and other social networking sites have had on societies and local communities can only be seen as negative. Rather than individual people taking part in their local community, they are instead choosing to take more interest in people online. Consequently, the people within local communities are no longer forming close or supportive relationships. Furthermore, society as a whole is becoming increasingly disjointed and fragmented as people spend more time online with people they have never met face to face and who they are unlikely to ever meet in the future. To conclude, although social networking sites have brought individuals closer together, they have not had the same effect on society or local communities. Local communities should do more to try and involve local people in local activities in order to promote the future of community life. Comments: This essay shows you the organisation of ideas into paragraphs and also how a clear answer is given in the thesis statement in the introduction and then supported and explained in full throughout the essay. You will also see paraphrasing for advantage / disadvantage language which can be useful for you in other essays. Furthermore, the word length of this essay is typical for anyone aiming for band score 6, 7 or above. Words 280 Useful IELTS Pages for Writing and Other Sections Ideas for Essay Topics E-book This e-book contains ideas and vocabulary exercises for over 150 common IELTS essay topics. It is now available with my Advanced Writing Task 2 Lessons in my store. Click here: Liz’s Online Store ———————- Subscribe for Free to get New Post by Email Let’s take a closer look at the two-part question IELTS essay. This essay is a specific subtype for IELTS Writing Task 2; it requires you to answer two separate but related questions about a social issue. For more info on the two-part essay, including tips and tricks, check out Magoosh’s complete guide to IELTS Writing Task 2 question types. Below, I’ll give you a sample question and sample response for this Task 2 question type. The response itself will be based on Rachel’s IELTS Writing Task 2 template. This essay is a Band 9 model essay. See the score explanation after the essay for more info on why this essay is a Band 9. Two-Part Question IELTS Essay: Sample Question with Model Response First, let’s take a look at the question, complete with instructions: Two-Part Question IELTS Essay Sample Task Increasingly, people eat food from other parts of the world, rather than local food. What do you think is driving this trend? Is this a good or bad development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. Two-Part Question IELTS Essay: Model Answer In the present day, food from around the globe makes its way to our plates, thanks to free trade and modern technology. While this phenomenon has some downsides, I think it is ultimately a good thing, because it allows us to experience new food cultures and improve our diets. To understand the benefits of eating globally instead of locally, it is important to examine the causes. For one thing, trade agreements give participating countries access to food beyond what they can grow domestically. This international trade is aided by freezer transport, which can move food great distances without spoilage. As an example, free trade and food transport technology allows German diners to affordably eat pineapple, a healthy and delicious fruit that only grows in tropical regions. Through trade and technology, truly anyone can enjoy the best food the world offers. This kind of benefit opens our minds to other cultures and strengthens our bodies. For instance, someone in the United States may not have much firsthand knowledge of India, but if they are able to eat imported Indian food, they may develop an interest in the culture. As a bonus, food from India and other countries can help Americans and others to eat a balanced diet, even during times of the year when their local foods are not in season. Indian food is just one example; clearly, today we can enjoy a rainbow of national foods and nutrients. In short, trade agreements and rapid frozen food transport work together to create a better world. This new world allows us to become more aware of other cultures in a very enjoyable way while getting the nutrients we need to eat well. International food, then, is good for both our bodies and our souls. Word count: 291 Why is this a band 9 essay? This model response for a two-part question IELTS essay receives a top score because it satisfies all of the band 9 descriptors in the official IELTS Writing Task 2 rubric. Check that score guide out! And for an even more detailed look at why this essay is band 9, read the scorer commentary immediately below. (This commentary is based on the rubric at the link I just showed you!) Scorer Commentary (Two-Part Sample Essay, Band 9) The score report below is based on the official IELTS Writing Task 2 rubric. This report also looks very similar to the Magoosh IELTS essay scoring service. Overall Band Score: 9 CATEGORYTask Achievement/ResponseCoherence and CohesionLexical ResourceGrammatical Range and Accuracy SCORE9999 What was done well in the essay: At 291 words, this essay avoids the IELTS Writing word count penalty. The essay covers both parts of the question clearly and fully. Right in the introduction, the writer states that access to international food is good, and briefly states the reasons such food is becoming more available. These ideas are then explored in depth in the body paragraphs and reviewed in the conclusion. The first sentence of each body paragraph clearly states the topic. These main ideas are consistently followed by details, examples that illustrate the details, and final thoughts that summarize the main ideas, details, and examples. Transitional and referential phrases are used frequently to make the connections between ideas clear. Examples of this kind of phrasing include “for one thing,” “this kind of benefit,” and “in short.” Vocabulary and grammar are used both fluently and effectively. There are no serious errors there, and the words and sentence structures are varied so that none of the language seems repetitive. Additional Sample IELTS Writing Task 2 Essays There are four other common question types for Task 2 in IELTS Writing. 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Wills | Jun 27, 2020 | Model Essays | 0 | It’s time for another sample band 9 answer and this week we are going to look at a... Read More We collect recent IELTS essay writing questions here from test-takers and other public resources. It's a short list but maintained weekly. You can try them and save online. If you are willing to share one essay, you can submit it. Our tutors may rate it, and possibly select it into answer bank. 1. My Submitted EssaysHere only show your submitted essays. Please launch Exercise button to access essays that you save to either local or cloud.2. Recent Essay Questions 2021-06-26: EssayNo. 1 Some people say that traveling abroad is necessary to get knowledge about other countries, while others suggest that TV and the internet can also help people know about foreign countries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Keywords: Internet; travelType: Agree & DisagreeTested on: 2021-06-262019-11-17 2021-06-19: EssayNo. 2 In both education and employment, some people work much harder than others. What makes people work harder than others? Is it always a good thing to work hard?Keywords: work hardType: Agree & DisagreeTested on: 2021-06-19 2021-06-17: EssayNo. 3 More and more people are seriously overweight. Some people suggest the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Keywords: healthType: Agree & DisagreeTested on: 2021-06-17 2021-06-12: Essay (General)No. 4 Some people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working. Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Keywords: workType: DiscussionTested on: 2021-06-12 2021-06-12: EssayNo. 5 Some people believe that university education should focus on the skills of employment for the future. Others think they should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Keywords: education; employmentType: DiscussionTested on: 2021-06-12 2021-06-05: EssayNo. 6 When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion.Keywords: workType: Agree & DisagreeTested on: 2021-06-05 2021-06-05: EssayNo. 7 A family has a great influence on children's development, but the influence outside the home plays a bigger part in children's life. To what extent to you agree or disagee?Keywords: family; childType: Agree & DisagreeTested on: 2021-06-052019-11- 15 2021-05-29: EssayNo. 8 Nowadays in many countries, the proportion of the older population is higher than that of younger people. Is it a positive or negative development?Keywords: older peopleType: OpinionTested on: 2021-05-29 2021-05-29: EssayNo. 9 Some people think that advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals less satisfied with what they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Keywords: adType: DiscussionTested on: 2021-05-29 2021-05-22: EssayNo. 10 Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people?Keywords: artType: Agree & DisagreeTested on: 2021-05-22 2021-05-22: Essay (General)No. 11 Nowadays many mothers take care of the family and don't go out to work. Some people believe they should be given salaries by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Keywords: governmentType: Agree & DisagreeTested on: 2021-05-22 2021-05-20: EssayNo. 12 Many people think that the best way to learn a culture is to learn the language of it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Keywords: language; cultureType: Agree & DisagreeTested on: 2021-05-20 2021-05-16: EssayNo. 13 People should look after their health as a duty to the society they live in rather than personal benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Keywords: health; societyType: Agree & DisagreeTested on: 2021-05-16 2021-05-08: EssayNo. 14 Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Keywords: trafficType: Agree & DisagreeTested on: 2021-05-08 2021-05-08: Essay (General)No. 15 In many countries, traditions and customs are disappearing. What are the reasons? What should schools and parents do to keeping our traditions alive?Keywords: cultureType: Cause & SolutionTested on: 2021-05-082020-06-13 2021-04-29: EssayNo. 16 Some people think in order to continually improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others feel that this would result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Keywords: schoolType: DiscussionTested on: 2021-04- 29 2021-04-24: EssayNo. 17 In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Keywords: foodType: Agree & DisagreeTested on: 2021-04-24 2021-04-24: EssayNo. 18 Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?Keywords: technologyType: OpinionTested on: 2021-04-242020-12-202020-10-10 2021-04-17: EssayNo. 19 During holidays or weekends, young people spend less time on outdoor activities in the natural environment, such as hiking and mountain climbing. Why? What can be done to encourage them to go out?Keywords: young peopleType: CauseTested on: 2021-04-17 2021-04-10: EssayNo. 20 Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally-friendly mode of transport. However, it is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population?Keywords: health; environmentType: Direct QuestionTested on: 2021-04-103. 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